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Dawn Painting

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alt background:  weehee by Zoiby
couldn't decide which one i liked better

if you're leaving a comment then please say which bg you prefer because if more people prefer the picture one then i'll change it
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Your outline of the character looks way too crooked and noisy, which appears to be very off. I don't which program you have used for this, but try to use stabilizers or a lineart tool to make it look smoother.

Aside of that, I absolutely adore this piece! The mixture of warm colors and cold lighting gives a gorgeous look. You really seem to know much about shading and if the outline would have been smoother, then I'd call this artwork perfect for what it is meant to be.

You did an amazing job on this, your admirable shading skills have convinced me to watch you! But you need to work on your outlines so you can aim for perfection <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>